Joelle Barros – Delivering Discipline with Love and Crop

Literary Critisism

Bianca asked Joelle to read her short story and offer a critique. When Joelles response to Biancas work was less than positive, the fiery red haired girl called her lover a bitch. Joelle decided that Bianca needed a special lesson. She was made to prostrate herself on the floor, head down and bottom up. After Joelle removed the girls panties, she was completely exposed and vulnerable. Joelle proceeded to discipline Bianca with the crop and her hand. Bianca found it hard to contain her fear as she was punished in this most submissive of positions as Joelle punished her with the crop and hand. Joelle felt that the problem with Biancas short story was that it was about nothing. Once her punishment was over, Bianca was required to remain in her exposed position. Joelle noted that once she is granted permission to get up, shed be happy to help her lover with her story, as she now has something to write about.withBianca Rose and Joelle Barros